A Haiku

Apr. 25th, 2006 09:27 am
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"D'oh!", I exclaimed
Walked to work, standing tall
All while flying low

Date: 2006-04-25 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heathertree.livejournal.com
Oh man! Oh man! That happened to me the other day, but man, I did not turn it into such beautiful poetry, I salute you!

Date: 2006-04-26 01:30 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
D'oh is one syllable. Your haiku is weak and flacid. But funny

That was me.

Date: 2006-04-26 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebrucie.livejournal.com
What I should have said was

D'oh: one syllable
Your haiku is very weak
But also funny.

Date: 2006-04-26 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bungle-lord.livejournal.com
"Dough? Can I have more?"
Not now, your timing is off.
Wait for the paycheque


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